valentines poem

[ZeusMcGaffer]

hey is this a good poem?

i made it for somebody im trying to ask out , its supposed to be funny

Kinda Like Oatmeal
you're kinda like Oatmeal
your good for my heart
your good for my soul
i would still like you
even if you had a mole
and in conclusion i have one simple goal,
to keep it real, that is the way i feel
all in all a meals a meal,
but nothing tops my oatmeal
its even better with orange juice,
but now im trying to beat Dr. Seuss

[Soviet]

hehe I like the mole part

[BigEasy]

What if it were a big black hairy mole right in the middle of her forehead? Let's see you do it with Cream of Wheat :D

[Bullitt90]

its too cheesy, she wont go for it unless she finds it cute.